John @ KKPS
I am a Year 4 student from Aotearoa New Zealand. This blog shows my learning journey so it is not perfect. Please comment on what I did well and what I could do to improve.
Wednesday, 6 December 2017
Thursday, 23 November 2017
Monday, 13 November 2017
Roz's nest
Hello blogger
Me and friend Rhianna mad a nest for Roz in chapter chat task we use glow siks and anther theings to halep me and my friend to.
Me and friend Rhianna mad a nest for Roz in chapter chat task we use glow siks and anther theings to halep me and my friend to.
Friday, 27 October 2017
black bear
As part of our learning for Chapter Chat 11, we completed mini research projects about stick insects, bears or camouflage.
We have been practising our skills for writing in our own words - no copying and pasting!
This is the learning task I worked on with Morgan
Be sure to leave a comment, letting us know what we have done well and what we could improve on!
Friday, 1 September 2017
The Shriek
This week we have been learning about DASH? paragraphs for adventure stories.
- D = describe the setting
- A = use action
- S = use speech
- H = describe how the character is feeling
- ? = use a cliffhanger or rhetorical question
We wrote collaboratively and used a writing frame for this learning task, then we wrote our own paragraphs today.
As John and Sienna quickly ran into the depths of the forest, they could see hundreds of dark gloomy trees surrounding an abandoned house. Suddenly there was a horrifying shriek that filled the air. John reached out for Siennas hand… but she was gone! John stood terrified with his heart pounding. A look of scaredness filled his face. “Where is she now?” John wondered, terrified.
by john andsienna
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