This is my character description
As the royal blue knight kills people with a bow and arrow being not seen until the people sow him and then the people runs off in tera and then he flood the
people like aning and he fooled the people until they stopped in a black spoke forest and shot them when they are out looking and they are die and then he comes across a old man and the old man took him to a seki t kassell
And took him in sindh the kassell and then they went back outside and
Went black to the living and sow ol of the dead people on the grand to be cin tiud...
Hi my name is Raden i am from Hay Park School.My class room 9 have been commenting on your guys's blogs.We like your improvement everyday.So this is my feedback some of your writing doesn't make sense and so could you please reread it and maybe write how to say the words? Finally does the assassin have a name? I was wondering why do you say knight for your character when it says the title Assassin.BYE!!!
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